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PostSubject: Kozen,Nishi   Sun Dec 05, 2010 3:22 am

Basic Information

Name: Nishi Kozen

Real Age: Unknown

Appeared Age: 22

Gender: Male

Rank: Espada Leader

Number: 0

Hollow Hole: Middle of chest

Mask Fragment: An actual mask he wears over his face

Number Tattoo: Above the hollow hole

Appearance: Nishi stands at 5’11” and weighs about 170 lbs. He has a muscular, yet skinny build. By muscular yet skinny I mean his arms are skinny but you can tell he has muscle on them. He has a semi skinny upper body, but he also has a very defined six pack. His body shows no signs of any scars, scratches, scrapes or blemishes. His body is what some would call perfect. When you look at him you can't really tell he is a fighter or that he has ever been in a fight.

Nishi has black eyes with purple pupils. His pupils tend to pulsate every now and again. The pulsating happens at randoms times and Nishi can not time them. He has jet black hair with light purple highlights scattered all through it. He keeps his hair in a bed of messy spikes which sit all over his head. It's basically a constant case of bed head. He never sees a point in fixing it, since he will just be going back to sleep.

When you first look at Nishi you can not tell where his hollow is and as long as he keeps his jacket buttoned up you will never know where it is. When he opens his jacket his hollow hole is finally revealed. His hollow hole is 23.5 inches in circumference and sits in the middle of his chest directly above his abs, but just below peaks. If you were to compare his hole to a human toy it would be the same size as a child sized soccer ball. Surrounding or outlining the outside of the hole are a white hollow remnants. These remnants don't hold any special meaning to Nishi. To finish it off Nishi's espada number is tattooed directly above his hollow hole.

The most interesting thing about Nishi is his mask fragment. Normally a mask fragment is exactly that a fragment of their former mask. In Nishi's case his mask fragment is an actual mask. Because of this mask nobody has ever seen his true face and he plans to keep it that way. The mask is broken up into four color blocks. Each block is either black or white with the other alternating next to it. Running through the mask are different tribal lines. As each line passes through to another block they alternate to the opposite color. The mask itself is rather skinny just big enough to fit and cover Nishi's face. The overall appearance is nothing special except for top right black block. This block has a medium sized black horn that sticks out from it.

Nishi's clothing is very unique. The overall color scheme alternates between black and white with a hint purple thrown in every now and again. The pants are normal espada pants; they're just a bit bigger and looser. Wrapped around his waist as his belt is a purple scarf. The scarf is just longer enough to fit and tie around Nishi. The jacket is longer then a normal espadas jacket and the shoulders have a long scarf like clothing from them. The right scarf is black and the left scarf is white. From the collar of the jacket to the end of Nishi's peaks. The jacket forms a black and white skull like face. Besides his two zanpakuto which are each strapped to one hip. His scarfs are the only other clothing accessories he has. He never saw a point in having so many things on. To him all that extra stuff would just weigh him down and annoy him.

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Personal Information

Likes/Dislikes:

Likes:

Power: Nishi biggest like is power. To Nishi power is everything and without power Nishi feels he doesn't have a purpose.

Strong opponents: Pretty self-explanatory. Nishi loves powers and so he loves facing strong opponents so he can defeat and devour their power. Thus increasing his own power. If he ever meets a truly strong opponent, one who can rival his own strength he will let them live just so he can face them again.

Mind Games: When Nishi is analyzing a person he loves to play with their mind. He will often ask question to pick apart and read their mind.

Stars Gazing: This is a rather odd like for a being such as Nishi, but none the less it is a like. Nishi enjoys laying in the sand and staring up at the starts. He uses this as a way to clear his mind and refocus.

Silence: Silence is just as peaceful as star gazing to Nishi. If he can't star gaze then he'd rather be in silence to think and clear his mind.

Dislikes:

Weakness: Nishi hates any sign of weakness. To him showing signs of weakness will eventually lead to death and he has no plans to die any time soon.

Weak Beings: Nishi's biggest dislike are weak beings. Weak beings do nothing but clutter up the world and stand in the way of power. In his eyes all weak beings should either get strong or just die off. If they choose to die off then they should let the strong absorb them.

Annoying Beings: Nishi second dislike are beings who are annoying. By annoying he means people who constantly bother him ruining his lazy nature. If it gets to the point that Nishi feels a person is getting overly annoying he will try to kill them.

Over-Talkative Beings: Nishi strongly dislikes beings who talk to much and just don't know when to shut up. Their just as bad as the annoying beings to him.

Over-Energetic Beings: Just like beings who talk to much, Nishi strongly dislikes beings who have to much energy. By too much energy I mean always happy and bouncing off the walls, basically beings who just don't know when to stop and be clam.

Strength/Weaknesses:

Strengths:

Keen Intellect: Nishi is gifted with great insight and understanding of situations at hand. Because of this he has a habit of analyzing and reading people after moments of meeting and interacting with them. After a short amount of time of being around that person Nishi can fully understand everything about them. This same strength is also used when he fights. Nishi can be highly perceptive and analytical, allowing him to easily deduce the basic idea of his opponent's skills to figure out their strengths and weakness.

Master Tactician: When fighting Nishi uses his Knee Intellect to turn into a master tactician. Nishi is a powerful and flexible tactician, capable of adjusting seamlessly to any given combat situation, if not plan out events well in advance. He understands the strengths, weaknesses and mannerisms of his enemies and creates strategies to achieve victory.

Master Manipulator: Nishi has shown himself to be a very crafty and cunning man. His most noticeable strength is his ability to deceive and manipulate others around him in multiple manners. He uses his ability to analyze and observe everything in his presence, allowing him to quickly understand a person's pattern of thinking and better manipulate them. He is also a powerful strategist, capable of formulating well-thought-out plans several steps ahead of others. These plans are incredibly involved and detailed, and are planned-out with the long term in mind, making them seem slightly convoluted.

Master Swordsmanship Specialist: Nishi is masterful at swordsmanship, capable of flawless precision and lethal attacks without much effort.

Enhanced Durability: While not having the most imposing appearance compared to other Arrancar or creatures for that matter, Nishi has shown to be a very resilient fighter. Due to his countless fights against other hollows and shinigamis , Nishi has built up a high tolerance for pain. When fighting despite any injury he receives he will continue to fight effectively and even ignore his wounds to the point that he seems unfazed by them. His tolerance is so high he will even damage himself in a fight, if it means he will win.

Weakness:

Overconfidence or Cocky: Nishi's biggest weakness is his overconfidence or cockiness. Because Nishi can analyze and read a person he feels he knows everything about them. Because of this feeling he treats them as if they are not on the same level, so he comes off as overconfident or cocky.

Laziness: Yes Nishi's fake overall nature is based on his laziness, but because of this laziness Nishi will often not do things he is suppose to do. He feels doing to much work will ruin his lazy mood and thus ruining the act he wants to keep up.

Hand to Hand combat: Nishi spent most is not all of his training on perfecting his swordsmanship. Because of this Nishi neglected to train himself enough in hand to hand combat. If he can't fight with his blade or another blade then he rather not fight.

Enhanced Durability: Nishi's high tolerance for pain is a double edged sword. On one side he can fight without feeling anything. On the other side because he feels nothing he will often push his body to far and over its limits. Once his body has surpasses its limits it will often breakdown causing Nishi to lose control and pass out.


Personality: When you first meet Nishi there are a few words to describe him, such as calm, collected and at times quite. He tends to not worry about the things that must be worried for and he never shows emotion unless the situation demands it. Under normal times, situations or when he is around others Nishi will have the same bored expression pastered upon his face. Most of the time Nishi wont speak much, choosing to observe more then speak. Not much of a talker Nishi will stay to his own thoughts and dreams. On the rare occasion Nishi engages into a long conversation, that is more than small talk, he will only do so because it's something that intrests him greatly. To sum it up at first glance Nishi seems like a nice loner, but that is far from the truth.

Calm, collected, quite are just the minor things that make up Nishi. The main thing or word to describe Nishi is Lazy to the highest degree. Nishi is nothing more then a lazy laidback bum. He'd rather sit around and watch stars all night rather then fight. Because he is so lazy Nishi doesn't like to be rushed and will let it be known. Most of the time he will take his time doing things, so engrossed in his own thoughts Nishi wont do things at a faster rate than he needs to. Nobody knows is he does this on purpose or if it is just how he is.

His two overall favorite things to do in life are sleep and star gaze. His least favorite thing to do is fight POINTLESS fights. He feels pointless fights do nothing but ruin his lazy, laidback nature. If he finds a fight to be pointless he will not fight it and there is nothing that can make him fight. Just because he'd rather not fight doesn't mean he's a push-over. When the time comes and he has to fight he will fight without remorse or mercy. During battle Nishi regards his enemies with the same expression and attitude he gives his comrades: complete boredom and contempt. Battle is the only time Nishi will do things at a higher speed rate and he'll only do that once he has read his opponent. Nishi enjoys a good battle, but a long carried on one bores him very easily and as such he will want to end it soon. Despite the way he acts or comes or comes off, Nishi is very intelligent and a brilliant stagiest. He can read his opponents movements and fighting style after only moments of fighting them. These traits are often over shadowed by his laziness.

With Nishi's laziness also comes his pride. He may be a lazy, laidback bum, but he has pride. Because of this pride he lives by these words "I am who I am, I can be no way else. Should I stop being who I am, than I no longer deserve to live". Nishi holds these word in the highest regards. They are like his code or honor or warriors code.

The last thing to describe Nishi is power driven. Nishi has always lusted after power ever sense he became a Vasto Lorde. He wishes to become most powerful being in the entire world. Only then will he truly be satisfied or so he hopes. He will not let anything stand in the way of his goal to become more powerful and he will do anything to get power. As long as it doesn't go against his code of honor.

Nishi is all the things stated above, but these things are just a front. Nishi being one to never reveal his true motives or intentions has created a fake personality for himself. This fake personality is so people will see him as weak and try to take advantage of what they believe to be a weak individual. His true personality is one of sarcasticness, brutality, ruthlessness, and a sadistic nature. The last three things are fueled by never ending blood-lust. Nishi doesn’t care about anything or anybody if it’s in his way he will kill it without hesitation or another thought. He’s come to realize that you ask once and if it’s not done at the moment you asked then you force it to happen. The best way to describe him is by simply saying he has thrown away his humanity or has forgot what it was to ever be human. If a time should ever come when Nishi has to stop with his front and show his true self. May god have mercy on the poor soul who was the unfortunate one to be the cause for him to reveal himself because Nishi won't.

Sexual Orientation: Straight

Relationship Status: Does it matter

Resurrecion Information

Name: Juicio (Judgment)

Represent: Wolf

Family: Metal

Phrase: Llueve Sobre Ellos, Juicio (Rain down upon them, Judgment)

Looks: Because Nishis' reiastu was so big when he ascended to arrcanar his zanapkuto powers where split between two zanpakuto. They both still lead to the same release; they're just two halves to the same whole.

The first Judgment zanpakuto is a regular size Tachi. The blade is around 28 inches long and is made of a very flexible white steel. The overall weight of the entire blade is 2.25 pounds. The handle of the Tachi is all white with gold diamonds on the inside. The guard is in the shape of a gold sphere with line running through it.

The second Judgement zanpakuto is a regular size katana. The blade is around 25 inches long and is made from carbon steel. This is blade is very unique in the fact that it is made up of two colors instead of one. The first color which covers majority of the blade is black. The black color runs from the tip of the blade to guard. it covers about 3/4ths of the blade and stops just before the butt of the blade is reached. The butt of the blade is made from the same carbon steel, but it's silver not black. This blade is slightly heavier then the Tachi weighing 3 pounds. The gaurd of blade is in the shape of a very thin 4 point star. The inside of the star is black and the outline of the star is silver. The grip is a combination of black and red with a gold cap on the end.

When Nishi goes into his resurrection he must hold both blades and speak the release phase. After Nishi speaks his release phrase two separate things happen. The first thing is the Tachi glows a bright white and engulfs Nishi in a white light. The second thing is the Katana glows dark black and after the white light has engulfed Nishi. The dark light overpowers and engulfs Nishi and the white light. The two lights fuse causing a sliverish grey light to form and then fade away. When the grey light fades Nishi stands in his resurrected state.

The first notable change to Nishi in his resurrected state is his hair. Before his hair was black and purple but now its solid white. It no longer sits in a bed of messing spikes, now it is spiked up or standing. The second notable change is his clothing; his overall physical look is the same as before. The first and biggest difference is now his clothing is solid black. The second difference are the scarfs that sit on his shoulders. Before they were just single scarfs but now they have split into two separate but joined scarfs. The scarfs are joined by two smaller scarfs they connect them to each other. He also has six little scarfs around the collar of his neck. The last and finally change to his resurrected state is his mask. The mask is no longer black and white but solid black. Along with the color the look of the mask has changed. The mask is completely closed with no eye holes, yet Nishi can still see.

Now in this state it looks as if Nishi only has one blade, but that is far from the truth. Nishi actually has 8 blades though only one is noticeable when you first see him. The first blade you see is a combination of the Tachi and Katana. Nishi calls this blade Seruro.(I don't really know how to explain it so look at the picture). You don't see this blade when Nishi first enters resurrecion because it is strapped to his back. Nishi will keep the blade stappred to his back until he feels he needs to use it.

The other 7 blades are truly unique.

Floating around Nishi in his resurrected state at all times are 7 invisible blades. These blades are simple known as The Sins. Each blade is shaped differently and unique to itself. Each blade is also named after one of the seven deadly sins. When the blades are idle or just floating around Nishi they are invisible. This is the reason why at first look it’s as if Nishi only has one blade. When Nishi wants to attack or defend with them they will appear, meaning as soon as they come in contact with something or move, the blades will flash and stay exposed for several seconds before vanishing again. Nishi is able to move them around with his mind, and doesn't need to physical touch them for them to attack or defend. When I talked to some people about it, they found a visual really helped so this is kind of what I am going for.

Segunda Etapa:

Release Phrase: Despertar, Juicio (Awaken, Judgement)

Looks: As Nishi speaks the release phrase he forms an orb made of magnetic energy. He then shatters that orb on his chest, beginning his transformation. When Nishi enters Segunda the only thing that really changes about him is his appearance. When the orb is shattered a blue light covers the battlefield and Nishi vanishes in the light. When the light vanishes and Nishi reappears his body, clothing and mask all still look. The one and only difference is Nishi now has 6 wings sitting on his back. With the addition of these wings Nishi's reiatsu has more then tripled what it waso at first and all his previous wounds have been healed.

Judgment 1
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Judgement 2
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Resurrección State
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Seruro
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The Sins
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Segunda Etapa
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Techniques

I feel I should give a small explanation to exactly what Nishi's abilities really are.

Magnetism Manipulation: Nishi has the ability to generate and control existing magnetic fields. Many believe that his power is limited to manipulation of ferrous metals meaning he can affect a very large quantity of metal at one time: he can levitate metallic objects. He is also able to use his magnetic force to push and pull paramagnetic and diamagnetic objects. The maximum amount of mass that he can manipulate at one time is unknown. If he had to guess he'd say anywhere betweem 500 and 1000 yards. He can manipulate a large number of individual metal objects simultaneously, and has been shown capable of assembling complex machines using only his powers. Even though this is his power this is far from the truth of what his power is really capable of. Using his power Nishi can affect the magnetism of things at a molecular level. By doing this Nishi can levitate his own body and fly, form a force field around himself or enemies, or make miniature wormholes to safely teleport himself and others via the wormhole.. The wormholes are done by creating an extraordinarily powerful electromagnetic force, spinning at an extremely fast rate. He is so adapt to the power that he can rearrange how things are connected, potentially turning any solid surface into metal. Yes this does mean that Nishi can potentially control the iron in ones blood and body. Because electricity and magnetism are both aspects of the electromagnetic force, it is possible for Nishi to generate electrical currents (via electromagnetic induction) and to produce electromagnetic radiation of various frequencies. This radiation can result in EM pules of great strength. It has also been said that Nishi is capable of resisting telepathic attacks because of some physical aspect of his electromagnetic powers that can interfere with telepathy.

What is stated above is just a description of how the power works. Below are the techs that involve the power and what Nishi can actually do in battle.

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Arrancar gained traits
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History and RP Sample

History:

Human Life

In the far beginning, at the age during when Nishi was still a living being, he had an average living and life. He wasn't all too special in any way as far as physical looks go, but what was special about him was his job. Nishi was a trained assassin and had almost thousands of battle, tactical, and killing strategies in his head at all times, no matter the situation. On his regular day job, he worked as a waiter in a restaurant near Kamakura town.

One night when he was casing out his next target he had heard a loud explosion a block away from him. Knowing this could possible ruin his kill he had to check it out. When he got to the source of the explosion, his eyes were amazed at what he saw.The damage before him seemed all to new, and, from what? Meteors? There were craters, huge slashes in the buildings and the ground. What had happened here? That was the main question in his head. Not completely sure he wanted to find out, so he turned to walk back to his future kill. As he walked his vision caught sight of creature with a white mask. A dark energy rose from creature and started to engulf Nishi. Was this the cause of the damage and destruction?

Nishi would soon find out as the creature let out a loud roar. The pure force of the roar was enough to cause more buildings to fall. When the roar died now the creature turned his attention on to Nishi. Nishi knew what he was thinking and decided to beat him to the punch. Using his own battle and fighting tactics, Nishi attacked the creature. Despite everything he knew, he still wasn't a match for the creature and within seconds, his body was smashed into pieces. Without a second thought the creature absorbed Nishi's soul.

Hollow

The furthers Nishis mind could remember back was to the day he evolved from Gillan to Adjuchas. He doesn't remember much about the process of evolving. He just remembers one thousands separate minds turning into one unified mind. That one unified mind being him. When he awoke he was in the Menos forest with a new look and no name. The look was that of a six foot tall wolf with wings. The wolf had no idea what to do so he just roamed the forest. It wasn't until he ran into another hollow who tried to devour him and fail did the wolf know what he would do. The wolf figured his purpose was to roam and eat all the weak hollow who failed to eat him, so that's what he did.

For years after his birth he roamed the forest devouring every hollow he came in contact with. He didn't care what the hollow looked like, or how he acted. They were all food for him to feast on. The wolf had not a care in the world to him his life was perfect. He had never come across a hollow that could beat and devour him. He was the top of the food chain in the forest, but all that changed.

One hundred years after his birth the wolf was doing what he always did. He had just killed and was devouring a bat hollow. When another presence started appeared in the forest. The power of this presence rivaled that of the wolf, which peaked his curiosity so much he threw his bat feast away. Enticed by the soon to be meal the wolf stalked and hunted the presence down. When he found the creature behind the power he wasn't surprised at what he was doing. The creature was feasting on a weak hollow, but instead of turning to face the wolf. The creature continued to devour his current meal. The wolf took this as an insult and launched at the creature. The creature had anticipated this and fired a cero from his tail at the wolf. The wolf who had never seen a cero before in his life tried to devour it. Sure enough he failed and was blasted back. The creature laughed and stood from his meal. When the wolf looked at him his eyes couldn't believe what he was looking at. This creature looked like a human instead of an animal. Slowly the creature made his way over to the wolf.

"You are a weak excuse for a hollow. My last meal put up more fight then you did"

"What?"

The creature started to laugh. It was obvious he was playing with the wolf, which made the wolf infuriated. With his rage boiling the wolf lunged at the creature and snapped his mouth around the creature’s neck. Sensing he had victory the wolf closed his mouth down tighter, but was surprised when his mouth wouldn't move anymore.

"What's wrong wolfy? Can't get a good taste"

Before the wolf could even respond he was blasted back by another cero. This cero was more powerful then the last and almost killed the wolf. The creature just laughed as he stared sown at the ding wolf.

"I was wrong you do have some fight in you and because of that I will give you a gift."

The creature took his right arm and ripped it off. As soon as it separated another arm grew back. The creature then tossed his arm to the wolf.

"Devour some of my power and become stronger. I can tell you will make a fine meal one day, so grow stronger so I Shiro the Vastor Lorde can have the pleasure of devouring you one day."

With that Shiro vanished. The wolf not knowing what else to do devoured the arm. Instantly his power tripled and all his wounds were healed. The wolf had never experienced anything like what he had just went through. That’s when he changed his mission from devouring the weak hollow. To becoming strong enough to devour and consume Shiro. He didn't care what he had to do to do, but he would devour Shiro at all cost.

Another hundred years would pass before the wolf ever saw Shiro again. During that time the wolf focused on nothing more then getting stronger. He explored more of forest to find and devour stronger hollows. In the hundred year time frame his power had doubled 10 fold. Once again he was at the top of the food chain. Not only had his power increased but, he also learned the art of firing a cero. In the wolfs mind he could finally take Shiro down. For the next filthy years the wolf speant all his time hunting Shiro down. It took an additional twenty-five years but the wolf finally found Shiro.

"Wolfy you found me"

The wolf wasted no time and fired a several ceros at Shiro. Following the ceros the wolf charged at Shiro. for some reason Shiro didn't fight back and took ceros head on. This surprised the wolf and caused him to sop his attack.

"Why are you not fighting back?"

Shiro laid on the ground with a smile on his face. The wolf didn't understand and slowly approached the beaten Shiro.

"I lied when I told you I was Vastro Lorde. I'm just a Adjuchas like yourself, but together we can become a Vastro Lorde. I gave you my power to put you on the track to become stronger, I knew I couldn't do it by myself. Now devour me so we can become one and reach the true pinnacle of power."

The wolf wasted no time and devoured every last bit of Shiro. At first nothing happen, but after a moment the wolfs entire body started to shake. The shaken eventually lead to his body exploding with reiastu. As the smoke from the explosion cleared the wolf was no longer a wolf. He was now a black humanoid figure with a wolf's mask and hollowifed wings. He no long had wolf claws but razor sharp talons and a long tail. Instead of a mouth full of teeth he had a mouth full of fangs. He was no longer Shiro or the wolf, but an entirly new being. This beings name was Nishi. With his new power Nishi retreated to the depths of the forest. He continued to eat and devour hollows, but instead of being very active like he was before. He had a less active almost lazy demeanor to him.

Arrancar

Another hundred years had passed before Nishi had shown his himself. His power had grown so great that he could devour any hollow he stepped within 10 feet of his reiastu. Nishi would have kept himself hiden, but he heard a rumor about a greater power. Now Nishi didn't care about this greater power, but the two hollows that were made to form him did. Because of this Nishi would always crave and seek out more power. He had a thrust for power that would never end. With his thrust driving him Nishi left the forest and went topside to the white sands. Nishi spent another fifty years roaming the sands looking for this new power.

Nishi had almost given up until he came across another Vastro Lorde hollow. The Vastro Lorde was much weaker then Nishi which is why nishi beat him with much ease. Before Nishi devoured him the hollow begged for his life. The hollows crys for life amused Nishi, but not enough to stop him. Just when Nishi was about to start his feast the hollow said something about a higher power. The hollow promised to tell Nishi how to achive it if Nishi let him live. driven by the power Nishi released the hollow, and sure enough he told him how to achieve the new power. Even though the hollow told Nishi how to get this power Nishi still devoured the hollow. Nishi wanted to be his most powerful when he transcended into this new power.

With no more power to be gained as a regular hollow, Nishi was ready to take that step towards more power. Without hesitation he dug his nails under the rim of his mask, Nishi began to tear the mask from his face. The flesh tore loudly from the base of his face, as the mask slowly pulled off. The sinew tore and shredded, allowing blood to ooze forth. The pain…was…indescribable. Nishi was literally peeling his face off. It was unlike anything he had ever felt before. Finally, the mask gave up its fight and fell to the sands with a clink. Now, it was time to feel another feeling for the first time – unimaginable power.

The body of Nishi began to attack itself. The pain that he had felt when removing his mask was now reverberating throughout his body. Reiatsu was pouring from every inch of its body…from every fiber of its existence, and the struggle to be released was more painful than anything it had ever felt. But, it was also more exhilarating than any feeling. It felt odd to be simultaneously in pain and ecstasy, but those were the two predominant feelings. Dropping down to his knees, Nishi grabbed his sides in an apparent self-hug. In all actuality, Nishi was simply trying to not lose himself in the transformation. Slowly, the once razor-talons dulled into human-like hands. The two wings that set so high on his back, sucked into his form. And like a piece of spaghetti being sucked into a hungry mouth, the tail reabsorbed into the body.

The sleek black skin color that had once covered the body of Nishi had been absorbed as well, leaving behind a smooth slightly dark tan skin that revealed rippling musculature. His face flattened and became incredibly human looking, which was somewhat unsettling for Nishi. Finally, the fangs of Nishi rescinded and gave way to smaller more humanoid teeth. And with the final change complete, the pain completely disappeared. Reaching up to feel its face, Nishi touched a softer, smoother face. In the peripheral, Nishi eyed a mask and two swords lying in the sand next to him. The mask and blades beckoned the touch of NIshi…begging for a master. Grasping the blades and mask, he felt the presences of his full power locked inside. He had finally done it, he had reached the ultimate pinnacle of power. He was now an Arrancar.

Anything after this point is unknown, or lost.


RP Sample:

Nishi stared blankly as both the bala and cero countered and hit. So far he had predicted everything the shinigami would do. Even if the shinigami refused to believe him, Nishi had him and his attack pattern figured out. It would only take moments for Nishi to prove it. Since the shinigami's normal attacks would no longer work on Nishi, he knew his power would win the fight. The shinigami knew this too, thats why he did the only logical thing he could do; go bankai. Which Nishi predicted he would do.

Just as Nishi had thought the shinigami bankai-ed and tried to attack again, this time with multiple scythes. Nishi knew he wouldn't be able to defend against all them but some was better then none. Without time to waste Nishi moved his blade to block the scythe coming at his neck. He used his leg and other hand to defend against the scythe attacks coming at his legs and back. Nishi ignored the other two scythes since he had no way to defend against them. Nishi showed no sign of pain as the other scythes dug into his flesh. He kicked himself several feet away from the shinigami and his scythes.

"Poor misguided shinigami. I predicted you'd go bankai, thats the only option you have. The funny thing is you think you're the only one who can achive another power level. "

Slowly Nishi's reiatsu began to manifest itself around his body.

"Desplome la Realidad, Juicio (Collapse Reality, Judgement)"

Nishi's reiatsu exploded in a blinding light and he vanished into the light. As the light slowly faded away Nishi stared at the shinigami with a rather disappointed look on his face.

"I really didn't want to fight, but you just had too. Now I have to get serious and kill you."

His overall appearance still looked the same except his wounds were gone. The only real difference was the 3 hollow wings on his back. He had the normal two on his back, and the third set in the middle of those two pointed outwards

"This is my Segunda Etapa, look upon it well shinigami for it is the last thing your eyes will ever see
"

As Nishi spoke a blade made of pure white light formed in his right hand. He pointed the blade at the shinigami just as he finished speaking. This was a sign and invitation for the shinigami to come to his death.


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PostSubject: Re: Kozen,Nishi   Sun Dec 05, 2010 10:53 am

Denied until ressureccion is put in the app along with his powers due to the fact that a res is to powerful to just pop up in rp.
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PostSubject: Re: Kozen,Nishi   Sun Dec 05, 2010 12:07 pm

Indeed, you were already told on numerous occasions to NOT hide your techs and skills.You can't use the fear of metagamers as an excuse because we need to know exactly what the character is able to do to determine if they are fair game.
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PostSubject: Re: Kozen,Nishi   Sun Dec 05, 2010 6:58 pm

It says WIP in the description, I have to change my techs which takes a long time. SMDH
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PostSubject: Re: Kozen,Nishi   Mon Dec 06, 2010 10:00 pm

Résureccion:
- Seven Sins: Fine as long as your opponents can feel their presences/reiatsu and have a general idea of where they are. Add it to the description otherwise it's too abusable.

Skills:
- General description: No unknown maximum manipulated mass, if you really insist on it being a secret you MUST PM it to me. Also, keep in mind the amount of iron in the blood is tiny and you can't do much with that.

- Molecular Manipulation: Transforming surfaces to metal through physics would actually require atomic or subatomic manipulation which I believe is too insanely and retardedly complicated for anything besides some Doomsday supercomputer from the future to handle. You might as well change this to a spiritual power.

- Magnetic Pull: Physics attacking spirit I don't think it should coherently work. It could be set to hinder your opponents's movements instead of their reiatsu though.

- Wormholes: I'm not sure wormholes form that way but I'll allow it for transport. If you insist of beign able to use it in battle I'll have to go read wikipedia for a few hours.

- Stop Right There: If you want a perfect freeze it cannot be an instantaneous glare. Add something like a kidoh-style incantation or a visual sign that it's coming to leave opponents a chance to dodge, otherwise it's OP as you can just blink at someone and Magnetic Charm right next to them and kill them without any defense being possible.

- Magnetic Push: Add something that makes it so you can't just LOLPULL people into your Zanpakutoh.

- Blood Filter : even if people do something about the marbles it should clutter their blood vessels and pretty much kill them no matter -what- they do. Let's not talk about how the effect within the skull would lacerate the brain and instant-kill the opponent so this skill is denied.

- Matter Meltdown: Only two details left, I personally believe a kilometer is pretty damn big so 500m or 750m should be the radius so people don't have to shumpo/Sonido a million times to dodge. Also, we use Km/H and not MP/h in my moronic country so you may want to use a simple comparison with a car or animal for it to be easier to understand for people.

Story incoherencies:
- How can you never see a cero in hundreds of years in the Menos forest? Gillians spam it like they're paid for it.

RP Sample:
- You state having a Segunda Etapa but there is no information whatsoever abotu Segunda etapa in this profile.
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PostSubject: Re: Kozen,Nishi   Mon Dec 06, 2010 11:06 pm

Sins - If you look at the underlined part when the blades move to attack or defend they become visble. Allowing the opponent to see them, the only time they are invisible is when they are idle or just floating around Nishi.

Description - I didn't mean unknow as some huge unknow number. I meant unknown as he doesn't actually know cause he's never maxed it out, but I added some numbers.

Molecular Manipulation: By effecting things on a molecular level Nishi is also effecting the subatomic particles which make any substance what it is. All substances are made of protons, electrons and neutrons and these 3 substances are connected by magnetic charges. By disconnecting those charges or adding more of the charges any substance could be changed into a different substance.

Magnetic Pull - If a person has a hard time moving, wouldn't they have a hard time gathering their energy?

Wormhole - It's the same principle as moving people, but i'll make it a separate tech with usage and cooldowns so it won't be overused.

Stop Right There - Added

Push - I don't get what you mean. He's not pulling anything or anybody, he's just pushing them away from him, but added.

Blood Filter: People don't die from it. They are just weakened, and bleeding but no death. It says that in the descprition but i'll add the no death.

Matter meltdown - Added conversion

History - The Gillian only do that when bothered or attacked. If you don't do either one of those then they don't spam ceros.

Segunda Etapa - That was a RP from a different site. I didn't actually plan to have a Segunda Etapa here, but i'll add it. All it gives Nishi is a slight appearance change, heals his wounds and give him more speed and reiastu.
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PostSubject: Re: Kozen,Nishi   Tue Dec 07, 2010 12:13 am

Sins - It's fine then, I thought they were only revealed when clashing or something.

Molecular Manipulation - I'm aware, I'm saying restructuring the very core of atoms who are in trillions within everything is a way too mcuh complicated thing for any sentient living being to handle. In other words, I'm saying no player character can do such a mind-blowing task. As I pointed out you could have it be a Spiritual power ability.

Pull - Not really, the spirit just flows, pretty much.

Wormhole - I'm not saying it's OP I'm saying "As ar as I know magnetism DOES NOT work that way" so now I'm going to have to read up on it to know if you can transport stuff with it AT ALL.

Push - Well you sad "any" direction, so that mean that direction could have been toward you. ^^" it's fine now.

Blood Filter - Yeah, people would die from it logically. ALSO, don't get me started on how the minerals in the human body is oxydized and unaffected by magnetism. : /

Segunda Etapa - mostly fine but don't you think three times OMG-WTF-FACTION-LEADERS-SO-FAST is a bit too fast?
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PostSubject: Re: Kozen,Nishi   Tue Dec 07, 2010 12:30 am

Molecular Manipulation - Spiritual ability?

Wormhole - Wormholes involve and give off a magnetic field.

Blood Filter - You don't have to die and it's not the magnetism he's effecting in the body. It's the metal and the human body is made up and has several metals residing in it

Segunda - Removed the speed
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PostSubject: Re: Kozen,Nishi   Tue Dec 07, 2010 1:01 am

Molecular Manipulation - yeah, converting mater through metals with science is way too complicated for a "human" braind to handle but if you say you're transmutating shit with your Reiatsu then that "may" work.

Wormhole - http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wormhole
Apparently, they're rips in the space-time continuum and you don't control that so no wormholes altogether for you, I told you to take my offer or leave it out.

Blood Filter - Unfortunately your power is over magnetism and not full control of all minerals. It's not staying.
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PostSubject: Re: Kozen,Nishi   Tue Dec 07, 2010 12:22 pm

Molecular Manipulation: How would you word that to make it a trait?

Blood Filter: Second line of the description: Many believe that his power is limited to manipulation of ferrous metals meaning he can affect a very large quantity of metal at one time. He's not effecting other minerals just metal. The human body has at least 5 metals residing in it.

Wormhole: I know what they are, thats why I want to use them. Your question was are they formed they way I described them to form, in which case I have proof they are.

A Kerr-Newman black hole must possess two important factors: a massive electrical charge and a high spin rate.

That is how I described him to form them.

Info taken from http://www.orbitalvector.com/FTL/Wormholes/WORMHOLES.htm
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PostSubject: Re: Kozen,Nishi   Tue Dec 07, 2010 4:08 pm

Mollecullar Manipulation: "Nishi can compress his reiatsu into a solid surface to slowly alchemize it in a magnetised metal he can use for various purposes."

Blood Filter: What part of "The metals within the human body are oxydized and unaffected by magnetic fields" do you not get?

Wormholes:
"A civilization that had to depend on Kerr-Newman Ringwarps for FTL travel would have their work cut out for them. First of all, they would have to sacrifice already-existing masses--planets and stars--to create them. Vast expenditures of energy would be needed to create them (spinning the mass up to near lightspeed, then collapsing it artificially) and to maintain them. They would also be quite delicate--even a relatively small mass (say, that of an average automobile) hitting the star-heavy ring could upset its equilibrium and send the entire wormhole collapsing."

From your own source it would take Absurdly tremendous energy to even only create the wormhole, even further ridiculously vast energy to maintain it, and then it would still be very highly unstable.
(Spoiler, any smart Arrancar can do that trick with a Garganta)
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PostSubject: Re: Kozen,Nishi   Tue Dec 07, 2010 8:21 pm

Molecular Manipulation: Added

Blood Filter: Do you know what the term oxidized means.

1. To combine with oxygen; make into an oxide.
2. To increase the positive charge or valence of (an element) by removing electrons.
3. To coat with oxide.

Now electrons are connected by magnetic charges, magnetism affects magnetic charges and magnetic fields, thus effecting the electrons.

Just because a metal is oxidized doesn't mean it can not be effected.

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http://www.thefreedictionary.com/oxidize

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Redox

The last link talks about the process of oxidation

If you have ever seen X2 the movie this is the same move Magneto used on the guard to escape from his plastic prison. This is actually the move that got me interested in the whole magnetism power in the first place.

I'm not getting what the big deal about this move is?

Wormhole: You're right a smart Arrancar could do that, but after it has been done. The person whose attack it was done too would complain about it not being fair. They would also try to state that Garganta don't and can't work like that. So it's just easier to have a move of your own with the same effect.
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PostSubject: Re: Kozen,Nishi   Wed Dec 08, 2010 8:43 pm

After considering a few point, namely: the unanimous consensus of my moderators and advisors and the fact that you don't seem to be able to understand when I'm saying "no" and when my friends explain you "it doesn't work this way", I've come to the unfortunate decision of denying this application.
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PostSubject: Re: Kozen,Nishi   Tue Dec 28, 2010 11:58 am

moved to approved after lengthy discussions in PMs
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