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A year after Aizen's captured by the shinigami, he escapes! In the human world, people are getting killed by the hundreds. Everyone's in a panic. It IS Aizen doing the killing though, right?
 
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    PostSubject: Kojiro Soyoki{Done}   Kojiro Soyoki{Done} EmptyFri Mar 25, 2011 7:31 pm

    Basic Information

    Name: Kojiro Soyoki

    Real Age: 327

    Appeared Age: 16(is it possible to have a "birthday" IC?)

    Gender: Male

    Division: Squad 4

    Rank: Lieutenant

    Organization: Kido Corps 2nd in command, (Hachi's rank i believe)

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    Personal Information

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    Zanpakuto Release Phrase: Shatter.... Mizu ya kōri no tamashī

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    Shikai Abilities:(Passive)

    Ability 1: Temperature Decrease
    After activating his shikai, Kojiro's spiritual pressure slowly begins to lower the temperature in the immediate area. His enemy(s) will slowly (each post) start to get colder and colder until the find themselves unable to move because of their ever lowering temperature. He ranges his spiritual pressure in the form of a dome.

    Ability 2: Frozen touch
    After activating his shikai, Kojiro's sword gains the ability to freeze things it comes in contact with other than its owner. This is not an instant freeze however. Things that retain body heat, take longer to freeze than things that don't for example a person would take longer to freeze than a building.

    Ability 3: Temperature Change
    By sacrificing half of his orbs, Kojiro can cause it to rain. By absorbing the rain, Kojiro's sword can recovering spent spiritual energy.

    Ability 4: Healing Orbs
    After activating his shikai, Kojiro's medicinal practices come into play here. His water and ice orbs can be used to heal minor wounds. Depending on the wound, the amount of orbs increases of decreases.

    Shikai Abilities(Offensive)

    Ability 1: Orb Multiplication
    By focusing(1 post, each time used after increase cooldown by 1) Kojiro can add another orb to his arsenal. he starts off with four, though by using a whole post, he can create another. He must wait 1 post before being able to make another. Then he must wait 2 of his posts to create another.

    Ability 2: Water Orbs
    Kojiro's four orbs are split into two and two. Two are used for his water attacks while the other two are used for his ice defenses. Water tendrils, great bursts of water, these are usually attacks from the water orbs. Weapons can also be created though 1 orb equals 1 weapon. They can be controlled at a distance from Kojiro.

    Ability 3: Ice Orbs
    Kojiro's four orbs are split two and two. Two are used for his ice attacks while the other two are used for water attacks. His ice orbs often are often used for defend himself of his allies. Ice walls, ice plates, freezing limbs or weapons to increase their sharpness or power are only a few of the many things Kojiro's ice orbs are capable of.

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    PostSubject: Re: Kojiro Soyoki{Done}   Kojiro Soyoki{Done} EmptyFri Mar 25, 2011 11:56 pm

    done
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    PostSubject: Re: Kojiro Soyoki{Done}   Kojiro Soyoki{Done} EmptySat Mar 26, 2011 1:29 am

    Yes it's possible if you really want to have one, but don't expect to get cake and ice cream.

    ~ Tengoku no katto: sounds like an auto-hit. You can move at the speed just change the cut in half part.

    ~ Seikuken: Are people stronger then you are able to penetrate the shield without much effort.

    ~ Shadow body: This is going need a limit and cooldown. I was thinking usable 3 times per battle with a 3 turn cooldown.

    ~ Kojir Yanagi Hayurashi: As long as the opponent has a chance to react this is good

    ~ Ryuusei Seikuken: Is this a dodge or a shield like the other one.

    ~ Overall: Everything looks good, but you may want to make a few techniques that deal with your shikai ability. You don;t have too but I think it would help you out. Anyway change the few things above and you should be good to go.
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    PostSubject: Re: Kojiro Soyoki{Done}   Kojiro Soyoki{Done} EmptySat Mar 26, 2011 3:16 am

    http://kenichi.wikia.com/wiki/Seik%C5%ABken

    this is what i found about seikuken - the move isnt so much an actual shield its a field of view in the shape of a sphere. anything that enters the sphere can be blocked/deflected by the user. if the enemy is faster than the user, then the enemy can get strike while within the radius of seikuken and not have their attacked blocked or deflected

    http://kenichi.wikia.com/wiki/Ryuusei_Seikuken

    this is ryuusei seikuken

    dodging at the last minute

    moves for my shikai? U mean lyk the tendrils and stuff? and like ice shields? i mean if i was to make a list it would be 1 heck of a list.......cuz i mean water and ice there are a lot of possibilities added the limit and cooldown also added a drawback to heavens cut
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    PostSubject: Re: Kojiro Soyoki{Done}   Kojiro Soyoki{Done} EmptySat Mar 26, 2011 8:50 am

    What exactly is "Heaven's Snow"? I don't see it anywhere here.

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    Tengoku no katto: Heaven's Cut
    An attack created from Kojiro's fighting style known as ]"Heaven's Snow." Combined with shunpo, Kojiro moves at a near untraceable pace and cut's his opponent right in half from their blindspot. Because of the speed, Kojiro cannot change direction once he has started moving.

    This is OPed. Please fix it so it's not like he has no choice but to cut someone's right arm in half.

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    Name: Kojiro Yanagi hayurashi (Kojiro Willow Leaf Walk)
    An ancient jujistu technique that tricks the opponent into thinking the user disappears by having the user stay in the opponents blind spot. The user wears long pants to hide his knee movement and make an illusion of his center of gravity(in Kojiro's case its his shishihakusho. He then enters the opponent's blind angles and makes use of the opponent's slightest movement to throw him. While the opponent thinks the user is gone and tries to retreat the user can surprise the opponent with a surprise attack.
    Hakuda:

    Any way the enemy can see through this?


    Also, I saw your RP sample, and I just want to say that it looks good, but please try to use correct grammar here... no "u" for "you" and all that.
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    PostSubject: Re: Kojiro Soyoki{Done}   Kojiro Soyoki{Done} EmptySat Mar 26, 2011 12:43 pm

    ok so I completely changed Heaven's Cut

    Heaven's Snow is his fighting style. Sorry I didn't see a fighting Style section so i did not think that i needed to go into detail about it.

    added how the enemy can see through the willow leaf walk

    sorry about the rp sample hehehe
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    PostSubject: Re: Kojiro Soyoki{Done}   Kojiro Soyoki{Done} EmptySat Mar 26, 2011 1:13 pm

    ~ Tengoku no katto: Give it a usage limit like 4 uses per battle with a 2 post cooldown

    ~ Seikuken: You never answered if people stronger then you were able to penertate the shield with much ease?

    Everything else is good.
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    PostSubject: Re: Kojiro Soyoki{Done}   Kojiro Soyoki{Done} EmptySat Mar 26, 2011 1:26 pm

    yea Nishi if someone stronger came along and attacked while I tried to block they would crush it
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    PostSubject: Re: Kojiro Soyoki{Done}   Kojiro Soyoki{Done} EmptySat Mar 26, 2011 1:31 pm

    I'm going trust you to not be cheap with the orbs...

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    PostSubject: Re: Kojiro Soyoki{Done}   Kojiro Soyoki{Done} EmptySat Mar 26, 2011 4:19 pm

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