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 Primera Redo ((Done))

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PostSubject: Primera Redo ((Done))   Thu Mar 24, 2011 6:19 pm

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Name: Raiden Kiyade

Real Age: 2,411

Appeared Age: 37

Gender: Male .

Rank: Espada

Number: 1

Hollow Hole: Left side of chest where the heart would be

Mask Fragment: On both sides of Daniels Face andon his bottom lip and chin

Number Tattoo:On the left side of Daniels neck

Appearance:
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Daniel as yellow pupils with white eyes, Silver Hair, Stading at 6'5, weighting 189 lbs. The picture explains the rest


Personal Information

Likes/Dislikes:
Likes:

Fighting: Daniel finds Fightning somthing like a sport. Grown up from a violent tendisys.. he gains a mental advantage as his loathing for battle makes him agile for war.

Violence: the site of blood and murder makes Daniel crave a sence of war.. getting into battle more he understands and respects the art of war.

Power: Daniel craves for the high amount of power from being his rank of the espada.. he doesnt want the cero spot.. he wants the respect of being high class.

Dislikes:

Peace: Daniel doesnt see the point in "Peace" when he belives its what cause so much death within the world.

Life: Daniels heart has grown cold to anything that breaths.. his lonsome life within the white desert has strayed him away from his old instincts.


Strength/Weaknesses:

Strengths

Sonido/Speed Master: From being a Lightning Espada.. his speed is blinding.. being a sonido master and a agility master.. Daniel is hard to face off against just to his immense speed. Daniel was grown up off his own training..

High Lightning Reitsu Master: Daniel has embraced his reitsu type nd mastered it.. making his reitsu level Quite high.. his high reitsu levels is nothing compared to the Ceros.. but it is right underneath.. the second strongest within the Hucho Mundo.

Extra Hard Heirro: Daniels Heirro underneath his cloak.. makes his skin one of the strongest of the Espadas.. maybe even the hardest. But only Ranks out Ranking the Primera can cut through it.

Master Kenjutsu Stylist: From 2 thousand years of pure training.. Daniel is one of the Strongest Kenjutsu masters within the Hucho Mundo

Weakness

Low Strength: Daniel has trained his speed to such a high degree he isnt very strong...

Low Attention span: Daniel often has tendacy to stray off.. making him board

Hates being Board: Once Daniel becomes board he starts to make mistakes..

Annoying: He hates annoying people.. it pisses him off and makes him want to kill



Personality: Daniel is quiet, Wise, and very expeirenced fighter... He tends to speak only when needed but in situations Daniel can become quite intimidating

Sexual Orientation: Straight

Relationship Status: Single and looking..?

Resurrecion Information

Name: Sujou of Sono Raikou Washi ((Birth of the Lightning Eagle))

Represent: Eagle

Family: Lightning

Looks:
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But added on to the Picture two Solid White wings form off Daniels back, the wing having the same arrancar armor as Daniels skin. Daniels Blade also Changing into a Giant red blade the red blade full of vains of blue lightning streaks.


Techniques

Basic High Ranked Arrancar Techniques
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History and RP Sample

The New Primera Abilitys

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[
b]History:Daniel was a low class arrancar.. a eagle eagle gliding in the sky.. he was not much to thing of being a adjucas. Daniel one day landing near a man.. the man looking like a Shinigami.. hereached twords Daniel.. speaking softly into Daniels ears.. he held a gem to Daniels chest. Daniel squirming his body went through a drastic change.. himself.. a lonesome Hollow.. had now become, somthing.. a human?.. no.. Shinigami? He didnt know. Standing lost in time Daniel woundered. Wanting to be somthing he was not.. he just woundered. Soon many years.. so many Daniels days just passed him. He stumbled upon the site of the Hucho Mundo.. the huge collosium. Aizen.. the one who had changed him.. was being taken.. Daniel just woundering.. a shinigami had found him. Daniel looking he was naturaly talented in fight. The end battle Daniel won.. He woundered through the Hucho.. A blade on his left hip from the time Daniel had became an Arrancar. A dying Epada member looked at Daniel as he was not expecting anyone.. he spoke " Run Arrancar, learn your abilitys" Daniel had trained for years.. learning his abilitys he Had become strong. Though after all these years.. Daniel has now approached back.. ready to make a change. Not much is known About Daniel as his past has been blurred.. ((I dont wanna fill this out))[/b] (

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PostSubject: Re: Primera Redo ((Done))   Thu Mar 24, 2011 6:24 pm

What is this? You don't need to do this, you're already approved and your previous character was just fine!
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PostSubject: Re: Primera Redo ((Done))   Thu Mar 24, 2011 6:26 pm

I got permisson, and i want to.
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PostSubject: Re: Primera Redo ((Done))   Thu Mar 24, 2011 7:18 pm

Bump

Im done With the Edit
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PostSubject: Re: Primera Redo ((Done))   Thu Mar 24, 2011 10:43 pm

bump
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PostSubject: Re: Primera Redo ((Done))   Thu Mar 24, 2011 11:40 pm

Don't bump we work as fast as we can.

Why did you do this?
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PostSubject: Re: Primera Redo ((Done))   Fri Mar 25, 2011 12:15 pm

Cause i didnt know the restrictions on abilitys, strength, and weakness's. So i asked Byakuya if i could edit, got permisson and i did
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PostSubject: Re: Primera Redo ((Done))   Fri Mar 25, 2011 9:35 pm

~ Winged Raiton Eagle Strike: Since you can use it twice a post give it a 3 turn cooldown

~ Eagle Lightning Sonido: 10x faster then a normal soindo is a bit much how about 5. Also since this is an enhanced Sonido and using your lighting its needs a cooldown. I was thinking like 3 or 4 but if you agree to lower the speed to 3X the cooldown will be 1 or 2 turns.

~ Finishing Raiton Release: Your Hierro can be cut by blades sharpened with reiatsu, other then that is's all good. Small suggestion you don't have to do this: if you remove the speed the usage can be bumped up to 6 post

~ Released Raiton Gran Ray Cero: 4 post cooldown because 6 is kind of much for a move like this.

~ Overall: Please don't use all you moves in the same post.
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PostSubject: Re: Primera Redo ((Done))   Sat Mar 26, 2011 2:31 am

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~ Winged Raiton Eagle Strike: Since you can use it twice a post give it a 3 turn cooldown No problem 3 turn c/d is good

~ Eagle Lightning Sonido: 10x faster then a normal soindo is a bit much how about 5. Also since this is an enhanced Sonido and using your lighting its needs a cooldown. I was thinking like 3 or 4 but if you agree to lower the speed to 3X the cooldown will be 1 or 2 turns. Thats good with me 3x with 1 post cooldown

~ Finishing Raiton Release: Your Hierro can be cut by blades sharpened with reiatsu(Yup thats perfetly fine), other then that is's all good. Small suggestion you don't have to do this: if you remove the speed the usage can be bumped up to 6 post No i will keep it as it is with the speed

~ Released Raiton Gran Ray Cero: 4 post cooldown because 6 is kind of much for a move like this. Thank you, i just didnt want to god-mod

~ Overall: Please don't use all you moves in the same post.
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PostSubject: Re: Primera Redo ((Done))   Sat Mar 26, 2011 11:26 am

Looks good...

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PostSubject: Re: Primera Redo ((Done))   Sat Mar 26, 2011 4:10 pm

Still a poor profile. But since you were approved, I will give you the rank you deserve.

Power Level: B-2
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PostSubject: Re: Primera Redo ((Done))   Sat Mar 26, 2011 4:33 pm

wtf do you want me to do.. to get this god damn app to a appropriate level of a Primera?
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PostSubject: Re: Primera Redo ((Done))   Sat Mar 26, 2011 4:39 pm

Learn how to write. Maybe get a passing grade in english class.

Not that hard, right? And B rank IS espada rank, and the primera is espada, so I think its fair. Your app is not based solely on your rank. Cero is different because he is the hollow king technically.

Thanks for reading buddy.
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PostSubject: Re: Primera Redo ((Done))   Sat Mar 26, 2011 4:48 pm

wow.. are you fucking kidding me.. i understand the rank im fine with that? But befor you go and start to insult my intelligence ask why I have a PEICE O SHIT computer thats so fuking slow.. i cant type a sentance without it skipping letters. So "Lucifer" befor you insult my intelligence. Did you know "Lucifer" means the bringer of light? Because he was the most loved angel by god himself. So when you want a character to be truly dark.. try learning your history. also FYI it would be Satan that would make you a Satanic Arrancar dipshit.. not lucifer
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PostSubject: Re: Primera Redo ((Done))   Sat Mar 26, 2011 4:50 pm

ENOUGH

both of you stop this right now, neither of you are supposed to comment on an already approved app, unless lucifer gives a rank. now stop this or you will be breaking the rules -_-
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PostSubject: Re: Primera Redo ((Done))   Sun Mar 27, 2011 9:23 am

Is this approved or not? If not, STOP moving it.

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PostSubject: Re: Primera Redo ((Done))   Sun Mar 27, 2011 11:47 am

it IS approved and I moved it once.
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